Tag: editing

  • National Novel Writing Month 2017: Permission to be terrible

    National Novel Writing Month 2017: Permission to be terrible

    Every November there is a big and very nerdy international event of significance only to writers: National Novel Writing Month. The basic idea is to write 50,000 words between 1-30 November. It’s supposed to encourage people to stop procrastinating / agonising over every word and just write. Your 50,000 words don’t have to be any good; they just have to exist.

    I find this very fNaNo-2017-Participant-Badgereeing. The thing about writing is that when you first start doing it you’re generally terrible. And the only way to not be terrible at it is to let yourself continue writing whilst you are terrible at it. This can be difficult if you’re anything like me. In another life, I worked as an editor, which made me intensely conscious of my own writing’s terribleness. Trying to learn to write while a critic sat on my shoulder and agonised over every adverb went about as well as you’d expect.

    NaNoWriMo taught me how to turn off my inner editor. Editing is great, but the writing has to come first. You can’t edit a blank page.

    I don’t always do NaNoWriMo, but this year the timing coincides nicely with my schedule, which has me finishing Book 4 in my Stariel Series before the end of the year (Optimism! Yay!). Right now I’m frantically trying to nail down some semblance of plot, ready to start writing on 1 November.

    Wish me luck!

  • My Writing Process

    My Writing Process

    A few people have asked why they can’t read Book 1: The Lord of Stariel now if I’ve finished writing it. (As an aside, this enthusiasm is awesome. Thanks guys!) The answer is mostly because I’m writing a quartet and at the end of Book 4 it needs to look like I knew where I was heading all the way back in Book 1. This can be achieved in two ways:

    (1) Knowing where I was heading all the way back in Book 1.

    (2) By returning to Books 1, 2, and 3 after I’ve arrived at the end of Book 4 and changing things to make it look like I 100% planned it this way the whole time. Obviously the overarching plot isn’t still a big foggy mystery to me in any way. Nope. Definitely not. IGNORE THIS ENTIRE PARAGRAPH.

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    Revision notes on one of my early drafts

    There’s another reason why finishing-a-draft ≠ book-being-immediately-available-to-read, and that’s the writing/publishing process. The writing process (for me) looks like this:

    1. Planning: Yes. Ahem. Moving on.
    2. The First Half of the Book: Shiny idea! I’m a genius! Look at all those words!
    3. The Mid-Point of the Book: Oh dear. Where was I going again?
    4. The End of Draft Zero: Whew, I finally figured out how it ends.
    5. The First Edit: Quick, revise the earlier bits of the book so they match the ending!
    6. First Draft Complete: The manuscript and I spend some time apart. A small number of trusted beta readers* read the book.
    7. Revision: I look at the book with fresh eyes + beta reader feedback and make giant lists of things to fix. I fix the things.
    8. Final Draft: OK, there’s generally a few drafts between Draft One and Final Draft, but let’s pretend in this hypothetical novel I fixed all the things in one round of revisions. Woo! Go me!
    9. And now onto the next step in the publishing process… (more on this in a different update)

     

  • Camp Nanowrimo

    Camp Nanowrimo

    had intended to finish the raw draft of Book 3 of The Iron Law before 31 March, all nice and neat and ready to start editing the entire trilogy* for Camp Nanowrimo on 1 April. As it turns out, I’m not quite done with Book 3, so Camp has become a combo of finish-book-3 and editing.

    *trilogy…yes…definitely not looking like a fourth one will be in the works. Um.